Drawing Better Essays

 
I am writing an essay about important inventions made during the Roman Empire.
 
This is a drawing of my essay.
 
In the attic is my introduction.  Then on the three floors below, there is the main idea on the right side, and the supporting details on the left side.  If you enter the house from the main door, you see a main idea.  If you don't understand, you can go through the back door and see the details.
 
In the garage, I put my conclusion.
 
Thinking of the house helps me remember what I want to write.
 
Osuman